Fwd: EMR2162508X
29 February 2008
12:08
Subject
Fwd: EMR2162508X
From
Erik Ribsskog
To
asktheexpert@creditexpert.co.uk
Sent
29 February 2008 12:06
Hi,
I got a general information e-mail from your company today.
And then I remembered, that I was wondering if it was some language-problems with
the message on my credit-file, that you added in August.
The messege was like this:
"I, MR ERIK RIBSSKOG, WOULD LIKE TO MAKE IT KNOW THAT I AM NOT REGISTERED ON THE ELECTORAL ROLL AS I AM NOT YET ELIGABLE TO VOTE IN THE UK. I AM INFACT A NORWEGIAN CITIZEN. I WOULD LIKE TO MAKE IT CLEAR THAT I CAN PROVIDE DOCUMENTATION TO VERIFY MY RESIDENCY AT MY ADDRESS ID REQUIRED TO DO SO."
I'm from Norway, so I'm not sure if I should complain about how something is written in English, but I was just wondering if the
last line of the message was correctly written.
Because it says:
'I WOULD LIKE TO MAKE IT CLEAR THAT I CAN PROVIDE DOCUMENTATION TO VERIFY MY RESIDENCY AT MY ADDRESS ID REQUIRED TO DO SO.'
Shouldn't it be, 'if I'm required to do so'?
I could be mistaking, and don't mean to be inpolite, by complaining on how someone who are British, write something in English.
But how it's written, doesn't sound right to me, so I thought I'd check this with you anyway.
Hope it's alright that I check this!
I don't mean to be ungrateful for the help, and I know I've only paid for one credit-file, but I thought that I should make sure it was
written correctly, in case someone had a look at my credit-file.
Hope this is alright!
Yours sincerely,
Erik Ribsskog
---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Erik Ribsskog <eribsskog@gmail.com>
Date: Aug 15, 2007 2:28 PM
Subject: Re: EMR2162508X
To: CreditExpert <asktheexpert@creditexpert.co.uk>
Hi,
I think your version of the explanation looked very fine, so I don't see any need to change
something that looks like it's done correct.
So, if it's possible for you, then I think it would be very fine if you please could update
my credit-file with the new version of the explanation.
Thank you very much for your help regarding this, I'll have a look at your website, and
try to get back to you to order a new version of my credit-record, after the update,
to see if there has been any improvement in the credit-score.
But I'll call back regarding this in a week or two if you think thats alright!
Thank you very much for your help again!
Your sincerely,
Erik Ribsskog
On 8/15/07, CreditExpert <asktheexpert@creditexpert.co.uk> wrote:
Our Ref: MM/41500917/PC
Dear Mr Ribsskog
Thank you for your email, which we received on 10 August 2007.
I note your comments, however I have been unable to open your attachment. In view of this I have drafted the following Notice of Correction for you. You may prefer to add a similar or different statement of your own. Please let me know if you would like us to add this or any other statement to your report. We cannot add a statement that is longer than 200 words or one we think is defamatory, frivolous, scandalous or unsuitable for publication for some other reason.
"I, MR ERIK RIBSSKOG, WOULD LIKE TO MAKE IT KNOW THAT I AM NOT REGISTERED ON THE ELECTORAL ROLL AS I AM NOT YET ELIGABLE TO VOTE IN THE UK. I AM INFACT A NORWEGIAN CITIZEN. I WOULD LIKE TO MAKE IT CLEAR THAT I CAN PROVIDE DOCUMENTATION TO VERIFY MY RESIDENCY AT MY ADDRESS ID REQUIRED TO DO SO."
Kind regards
Mr Martin Mitchell (MM)
Consumer Services Officer
CreditExpert
Experian Limited, a company registered in England and Wales with registered number 653331 and whose registered office is at Talbot House, Talbot Street, Nottingham, NG80 1TH
----- Original Message -----
From: "Erik Ribsskog" <eribsskog@gmail.com>
Date: 10 August 2007
Subject: Credit-file update
Hi,
I ordered a credit report from your company earlier this year, and called
your help-line regarding
the report.
I was adviced to wait a couple of months before I applied for a loan again,
and I was also adviced
to send you a file, in which I described about me being a Norwegian
national, and this being
the reason that it says in the credit-file that my address isnn't registered
in the electoral register.
So that why I'm sending you this e-email now, because I was wondering if it
would please be
possible for you to update the information in my credit-file, with
the explanation that I'm enclosing
with this e-mail.
Hope that this is alright!
Yours sincerely,
Erik Ribsskog
EXPEMA