tirsdag 2. mars 2010

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Erik Ribsskog
<eribsskog@gmail.com>




Søknadsevaluering/Fwd: Project Manager











Erik Ribsskog
<eribsskog@gmail.com>



Tue, Mar 2, 2010 at 10:29 AM




To:
CV <cv@nito.no>






Hei,

altså, CV-en min er jo satt opp sånn som det du sender.

Hvordan mener du at CV-en min er ustrukturert?

Kan du være så vennlig å presisere litt?

Det virker som svada det du skriver for meg, skal jeg være ærlig.


Dere har bare kødda med meg i NITO foreløbig.

Er dette bare noe tull?

Hilsen

Erik Ribsskog


2010/3/2 CV <cv@nito.no>



Hei.


Takk for henvendelsen.


Rent generelt er CV-en din for lang og noe ustrukturert i oppsettet.
Jeg legger derfor ved et enkelt oppsett som etter min erfaring fungerer godt.
Jeg foreslår at du omarbeider CV-en din, enten til vedlagte oppsett eller evt.
andre oppsett som finnes på nettet og sender en omarbeidet versjon inn
igjen.


Med vennlig hilsen

Marianne Bremnes
Organisasjonskonsulent



Tlf. 22 05
35 00
E-post
marianne.bremnes@nito.no I Nettside www.nito.no


NITO - Norges Ingeniør- og Teknologorganisasjon
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Postboks 9100 Grønland, 0133 Oslo








Fra: Erik Ribsskog [mailto:eribsskog@gmail.com]

Sendt: 24. februar 2010 23:03
Til: CV
Emne:
Søknadsevaluering/Fwd: Project Manager


Hei,


jeg leste i NITO's medlemsbrosjyre at det var mulig å få tilbakemelding på
søknad og CV, fra dere.


Så jeg sender en av mine siste jobbsøknader, pluss CV, og håper at det
er mulig å få tilbakemelding på disse, selv om de er på engelsk.



På forhånd takk for eventuell hjelp!



Mvh.

Erik Ribsskog


---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Erik Ribsskog <eribsskog@gmail.com>

Date:
Wed, Feb 10, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Subject: Project Manager
To: tmudariki@williameconsortium.com


Hi,


I saw that you are searching for a Project Manager, and wanted to please
apply for this position.


I have a university-level degree in IT, from Oslo University
College.


I've been working for ten years in managent, in one of Norway's biggest
companies, ICA.



I've also been working with System Development, and have been developing
accounting-programs for a Norwegian business, and I also have an upper secondary
scool degree in IT, from a well known business school, in Norway, Gjerde, where
much focus was put on co-operating with the customer-firm, throughout the
development-process.



I enclose my CV, and hope to hear back from you!


Yours sincerely,


Erik
Ribsskog












PS.

Her er det oppsettet NITO sendte:

Curriculum Vitae

 

Personalia

Navn:                                                       

Adresse:                                                       

Telefon:                                         

E-post:                                         

Fødselsdato:

Sivilstatus: (valgfritt)

 

Nøkkelkompetanse

Noen få setninger om det du mener du er best på, egenskaper som er nyttige både i forhold til utdanningen din og personlige egenskaper som kommer til nytte for en fremtidig arbeidsgiver.

             

Utdanning

Fra – til              Utdanningsinstitusjon. Fag, linje, nivå/grad

 

Arbeidserfaring

Fra – til              Arbeidsgiver, stilling
                            Arbeids- og ansvarsområder

 

Kurs

År/periode              Kursarrangør, type kurs, varighet

 

IT-kunnskaper

Grunnleggende Office-kunnskaper kan nevnes, men hvis du har kunnskap og erfaring innen mer avanserte systemer er det det som er viktigst å ta med i cv-en.

 

Verv

År/periode              Hvor og type verv

 

Annet

Språk (kan evt. stå i et eget punkt), sertifikater, evt. førstegangstjeneste, fritidsinteresser.

 

Referanser

Navn, arbeidssted, telefon, epost-adresse

Evt. skriv at referansen oppgis på forespørsel

 




PS 2.

CV-en min har visst noe problem med at noen usynlige kontrollkoder, for marger osv., som Microsoft bruker i Wordpad, gjør at margene ser rare ut på skjermen.

Men jeg får ta den med likevel.

Her er mer om dette:

Curriculum Vitae

 

              Erik Ribsskog

           Flat 3

           5 Leather Lane

           Liverpool

           L2 2AE

           Phone: 0151 236 3298

           E-mail: eribsskog@gmail.com                           

 

 

Personal Profile:

 

              I have a two year university-level degree, ('Høgskolekandidat'), in Information

           Technology, from Oslo University College, and I'm a member of the Norwegian

           Society of Engineers and Technologists (NITO) and the NITO managers-forum.

 

              I've been working within management for ten years, in the Rimi food-shop chain,

              in Norway. Where of four years as Shop Manager in three different Rimi shops.

              (From Wikipedia: RIMI is a discount store chain with 279 retail outlets

              throughout Norway. The chain is owned by ICA, but can trace itself back to

              1977 when it was founded as RIMI 500 by Stein Erik Hagen). In 2001, I won

              a Rimi Shop Manager-competition, ('Rimi Gullårer'), and I received a pen and a

              letter from Forbes-billionare and Rimi-founder, Stein Erik Hagen, where he wrote

              that I was hardworking and had very good management-skills.

 

              At school I used to be one of the best students, so I was allowed to study on the

              best Upper Secondary business school, in the neighbour-county, Gjerdes Upper

              Secondary School, in Drammen, Norway, in 1988/89. (I lived in Berger, in the

              north of Vestfold county, and went to school in Buskerud county, since Vestfold

              county bought ten places in Buskerud county yearly, at that time). And I have

              Upper Secondary business school-degrees from the Basic Office and Business-,

              Marketing- and IT-line.

 

              In 1996, I was hand-picked to a special elite Home Defence-unit, in Oslo, ('Støtte-

              området'), after serving my conscription service in the infantry, and also after being

              in the Norwegian mobilisation army, before it was reorganised, after the end of the

              cold war.              

 

 

Career:

             

              November 2008 - Today, Self-Employed, Blog-editor.

              I have a Norwegian blog, http://www.johncons-mirror.blogspot.com, that I've been

              working on, since I started with it, on my spare-time, in the summer of 2007.

              The blog is about people's rights and working against Government power-abuse,

              and much more.

             

              March 2007 - November 2008, Self-Employed, Company-Researcher.

              (Working as a freelancer, doing research on Scandinavian companies in the

              packaging-industry for a database, www.packagingdatabase.com, on behalf

              of Packaging Europe, Norwich).              

             

              June 2006 - December 2006, Arvato Services Ltd, Liverpool.

              Multi-lingual Contact Centre Representative on Bertelsmann Arvato's

              Microsoft Scandinavian Product Activation-campaign.

 

              August 2005 - June 2006, Randstad Employment Agency, Liverpool.

              Multi-lingual Contact Centre Representative on Bertelsmann Arvato's

              Microsoft Scandinavian Product Activation-campaign.

 

              March 2005 - July 2005, Løvås Farm, Larvik, Norway.

              Forest-work on a farm owned by relatives in Larvik, Norway.

              (Due to problems with getting Oslo University College to approve of the modules

              I chose at the University of Sunderland. This lead to that the study finance from

              Norway was delayed for more than one term, which lead to me losing focus on my

              studies in Sunderland, so I went back to Norway, to work, before the end of this

              study-year).

 

                June 2003 - August 2004, Rimi Langhus, Ski, Norway.

              Team Leader, Food Shop, part-time.

 

              August 2002 - January 2004, Rimi Bjørndal, Oslo, Norway.

              Team Leader, Food Shop, part-time.

 

              May 2001 - August 2002, Rimi Langhus, Ski, Norway.

              Food Shop Manager, full-time.

 

              August 2000 - May 2001, Rimi Kalbakken, Oslo, Norway.

              Food Shop Manager, full-time.

 

              October 1998 - August 2000, Rimi Nylænde, Oslo, Norway.

              Food Shop Manager, full-time.

 

              May 1996 - October 1998, Rimi Bjørndal, Oslo, Norway.

              Assistant Manager, Food-shop, full-time.

 

              January 1996 - April 1996, Chinatown-expressen, Eiksmarka, Norway.

              Chinese Food Delivery in Oslo West and Bærum, part-time.

 

              February 1995 - August 1995, Norsk Idrettshjelp, Oslo, Norway.

              Telemarketing, part-time.

 

              January 1995 - May 1996, Rimi Nylænde, Oslo, Norway.

              Assistant Manager, Food Shop, full-time.

 

              June 1994 - December 1994, Rimi Nylænde, Oslo, Norway.

              Team Leader, Food Shop, full-time.

 

              August 1993 - June 1994, Rimi Nylænde, Oslo, Norway.

  Food Shop employee, full-time.

 

              March 1993 - March 1993, Action Arcades, Lørenskog, Norway.

              System Development, Accounts Programmer, part-time.

 

              December 1992 – August 1993, Rimi Munkelia, Oslo, Norway.

              Food Shop employee, part-time.

 

              August 1992 – June 1993, Terningmoen, Elverum, Norway.

              Norwegian Army, Infantry, Conscription Service.

 

              August 1991 - December 1992, OBS Triaden, Skårer, Norway.

              Food Shop employee, part-time.

 

              September 1990 – August 1991, Matland/OBS Triaden, Skårer, Norway.

              Food Shop employee, full-time.

              (This was a well-known hyper-market, right outside of Oslo. It was called

              Matland, when I started there, but changed to OBS, (Coop), while I was

              working there. I worked there, during a sandwich-year, while I was

              studying, to save money, since I went to a private IT, (and business),

              university-college, NHI, in Oslo).

 

              August 1990 – September 1990, Det Norske Hageselskap, Oslo, Norway.

              Office Worker for the publication Norsk Hagetidend, full-time.

              (Some weeks when I worked here, I  also did some storage-work, on

              Det Norske Hageselskap's storage, in Tøyen, in Oslo).

 

              September 1988 - August 1989, CC Storkjøp, Drammen, Norway.

              Food Shop employee, part-time

              (CC, or Cash & Carry, in Drammen, was Norway's first shopping-mall, and this

              was a well-known shop, which later became a Rimi-shop, like the ones I worked

              in later, in Oslo).

 

              The summer of 1985 and 1986, Sand farm, Svelvik, Norway.

              I was picking strawberries, on a local farm, with some of my classmates the first

              year and with my cousin, Ove Olsen, from Son, the second year.

 

              1979 - 1988, Strømm Trevare A/S, Svelvik, Norway.

              I worked for my fathers family's company, a factory that produced furniture made

              by pine and spruce, after I moved from my mother, Karen Ribsskog, to my father,

              Arne Mogan Olsen, in 1979, when I was nine years old. I used to help when my

              father drove to Oslo and Tønsberg, etc., to deliver waterbeds and bunk beds. I

              was also responsible for the job of packing the bags of screws, for the beds,

              in the office of this company. I also did some office-work, in a second office,

              in my grand-parents house, which was next to the factory.

 

 

Education:

 

              September 2004 - February 2005, University of Sunderland.

              Study abroad, Computing.

              (I didn't get my study-loan on time, from the Norwegian Study-loan bank, (Statens

              Lånekasse), so I had to go back to Norway, before I finished the studies in

              Sunderland. I then worked on my uncles farm in Larvik, Norway, doing forest

              work, for the last months of this study-year).

 

              August 2002 - June 2004, Oslo University College, Oslo, Norway.

              'Høgskolekandidat informasjonsteknologi', a two year university-level degree in

              Information Technology. (Received in 2009, after I got some modules from NHI

              approved by Oslo University College, which I lacked, since I missed one or two

              exams, since I worked a lot in two Rimi shops, as a Team-Leader, when I studied

              at Oslo University College).

             

              August 1991 - June 1992, NHI, Oslo, Norway.

              2nd year NHI-candidate. (Computing, University-level).

 

              August 1989 - June 1990, NHI, Oslo, Norway.

              1st year NHI-candidate. (Computing, University-level).

 

              August 1988 - June 1989, Gjerdes VGS., Drammen, Norway.

              3rd year upper secondary school. Business-school. IT-line.

 

              August 1987 - June 1988, Sande VGS., Sande, Norway.

              2nd year upper secondary school. Business-school. Marketing-line.

 

              August 1986 - June 1987, Sande VGS., Sande, Norway.

              1st year upper secondary school. Business-school. Basic Office and Business-line.

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Courses:

 

Food Safety in Catering, Level 2, November 2009.

Jet, Wavertree, Liverpool.

 

Numeracy, Level 2, February 2009.

Learn Direct, Liverpool.

 

ECDL (European Computer Driving Licence), January 2009.

Learn Direct, Liverpool.

 

Literacy, Level 2, November 2008.

Learn Direct, Liverpool.

 

I participated on many courses when I worked for Rimi, from 1992 to 2004:

 

              -   Practical management for shop-managers.

-   Employment law for shop-managers.

-   Marketing/branding for shop-managers.

-   Loss reducing programme for shop-managers, (in the first shop I managed.

     This programme resulted in the shop was on budget regarding loss for the

     year 2000, the year the program started. The shop was Rimi Nylænde in

     Oslo, year 2000. With Area-manager Per Øivind Fjellhøy being my line-

     manager, who initated this program then).

-   Intermediate/secondary courses for shop-managers regarding how to run (Rimi) food-shops.

-   Basic and intermediate/secondary fruit/vegetable-courses.

-   Security (How to act if the shop is being robbed etc.). (This course was more or less yearly).

-   First aid course, and many more.

 

  NT Server Core Tech, May 1998.

              Global Knowledge Network, Skullerud, Oslo.

             

              Summer-school, English, Brighton, 1988.

              EF Language-courses.

 

              Summer-school, English, Weymouth, 1986.

              EF Language-courses.

 

              Summer-school, English, Brighton 1985.

              STS Language-courses.

 

 

Licences:

 

              Full driving-licence.

 

 

References:

 

Tim Sykes, Editor, Packaging Europe, Norwich. Phone-number: 0160 341 4444

 

Anne Kathrine Skodvin, Area-manager, Rimi (ICA), Oslo, Norway. Phone-number: +47 23 05 50 00

             

 

 

             




PS 3.

Jeg skjønner ikke hvorfor CV-en blir sånn, for den blir ordentlig i Wordpad og hvis man printer den ut.

Jeg vet ikke helt hva jeg skal gjøre med de usynlige kontrollkodene til Microsoft, for å få CV-en til å se bra ut i Google Docs også.

Jeg laster ned Open Office nå, som er en gratis konkurrent, til Microsoft Office, så kanskje den er enklere bruke.

Vi får se.

Mvh.

Erik Ribsskog

PS 4.

Her kan man se at CV-en min ser ordentlig ut på skjermen:

ordentlig ut på skjermen